## Course Link: [https://enroll.ship30for30.com/a/4bn32](https://enroll.ship30for30.com/a/4bn32) - link at the top
## Course Topic: Online Writing
## Course Type: Live Cohort, 5 hours of class per week with homework
**1. Personal Impact On My Work**
**- Did this change the way I think?**
Yes, definitely. It was a significant improvement to my writing workflow.
**- Did this change the way I act?**
Yes, definitely. I am writing about 3-4x more than when I started, even though I had a family member die during the 2nd week.
**- Did this improve my work while taking it?**
Yes, definitely. I have just finished the course and my writing is definitely smoother than before
**2. Apprenticeship Test (Can It Teach A Tabula Rasa Hire?)**
**- Can it train someone into the task/role/loop?**
With practice, this could certainly train someone into being a writer. I don't think it would enough on it's own.
With [[1. Ship30For30]] to implement the principles, it is probably gets someone 80% of the way.
**- How much of my effort is needed to clarify/mentor?**
I would do this alongside Sense of Style, Ship30, and [[3. Content Mavericks]] or [[4. Grow And Convert]] depending on the specifics I'm training into.
With another 1-2hours of writing feedback and mentorship each week, it is a very strong fit.
**- How much prior knowledge of the instructor or topic is needed?**
None. The course stands alone.
**3. Does it Deliver On It's Promise?**
**- 100% Absolutely Did?**
100%
**- Desired results achieved?**
In progress, definitely leveled up my writing
**- Good ideas, but no implementation?**
Good ideas with HW and live editing means implementation is required
**4. Is There An Active Learning Community Attached**
**- Are they easy to find/interact with?**
Yes, private on circle
**- Are they receptive and engaged?**
Yes, but more engaged on Twitter than Circle
**- Are they interesting and teaching each other?**
Definitely - everyone in my cohort was very cool
**5. How Accessible Is The Content?**
**- Is it available anywhere anytime?**
It is better live, but recorded for later viewing. Circle and youtube are mobile friendly
**- Is it easy for low bandwidth setups to interact?**
Pretty easy, but the video chat may be hard.
**- Is the content available forever? or just during a time period?**
Some of each, it definitely leans live at the moment though.
**6. Price/Value Ratio?**
**- How valuable is the network?**
The network could be as valuable as the course for me.
**- How valuable is the knowledge?**
The knowledge is available in Cole's book, but the group and direct access is worth the extra if you can afford it.
**- How valuable is the progress/accountability.**
Progress and Accountability come from Ship30, the little sister to this course
### What Would I Change?
1. Pre recorded presentations
2. Increased feedback during live discussions, prioritize people who do the homework
3. Extend course length to 6 or 8 weeks and reduce time commitment per week to encourage homework completion. I'd probably increase the homework a bit too.
4. Offer a pre recorded feedback/commentary system
1. Example: I submit some of my homework and get back a couple short (<1-5min) recorded reviews of it from other members or staff who read it and then record feedback